You float around my mind
You invade my slumber
You run through my veins
You live in my heart
You free me to dream
You release me to live
You open me to love
You allow me to hope
I have tasted your warm
I have fed on your goodness
I have savored your grace
I have received your kindness
Now you are mine
Now we are united
Now you are in me
Now we are one
Lovely free verse - rhythm and musicality combined.
ReplyDeleteA note: I think you meant I have fed on your goodness in the third stanza :-)
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Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot as i am a great admirer of your website and poems. I think you have a unique talent.
DeleteI am slightly dyslexic so i do 'miss' words sometimes, even though i read them through umpteen times.
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Oh that is quite sweet of you, Mametz! I'm truly just a red dirt girl hanging out under a pondering tree :-) I also tend to 'miss' words - more so as I am growing older. And I'm enjoying your blog. Nice to meet a new friend !!!
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